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« on: July 18, 2011, 03:17:59 PM »

Here are a few shots of the gradual progress I've made on this current drawing.  It's a picture of 3 bucks that my client and his son killed last year in South Texas.  He wanted a drawing of all 3 together in a South Texas Brush Country environment.  This is what I came up with.  I'm gonna call it "South Texas Border Crossing".

Started with the first buck jumping the fence.



Well, I started with just a faint sketch outline of where things would be laid out, then worked on the jumping buck, and then on the next buck that is crawling under the fence.






Then moved on to the third buck that's running toward the fence.






Worked on some of the background next.  Man, I don't know if I'll ever draw a barbed wire fence in bright sunlight again.  Leaving the white fence wire while drawing grass and brush behind the fence is a chore.  Everything in South Texas, including the fence, has stickers on it.  Lots of detail to try to draw.






More thorny brush....




More brush, but less detail as we go back into the scene.  Makes it a lot faster going.  Still a LOT of stuff to draw in and then I'll add shadows and grass and such.

Oh, and the right back leg of the crawling buck had been bugging me.  It didn't look right the way I had it.  There is a bunch of grass in front of that leg in the reference photo that I'm working from for that buck.  I thought the leg was going straight down, but it didn't look like there was that much room under the fence for that.  Finally, I looked more closely at the photo, and I saw his hock sticking up behind his rump.  AHA!  That's where his leg should be!   Fixed that.




That's all I got so far.  
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« Reply #1 on: July 18, 2011, 03:28:06 PM »

everything looks great, except not real sure I like the one going under fence though
sorry
Keep it up
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« Reply #2 on: July 18, 2011, 09:24:45 PM »

great work
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« Reply #3 on: July 18, 2011, 11:30:04 PM »

   Nice work. Good catch on the rear leg. Looking forward to the finished piece.
   An eraser works great for adding white lines over graphite. Like drawing a negative.

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« Reply #4 on: July 19, 2011, 05:48:03 AM »

Excellent work. Can't wait to see this finished.

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« Reply #5 on: July 19, 2011, 10:09:37 PM »

Thanks for the comments, y'all.  Timber Ghost, thanks for being honest.  I always appreciate honest opinions.  Help me by telling me what it is about the crawling buck that you don't like.  Honestly, I'm not going to erase him and start over at this point in order to get a different pose, but I can tweak little details like that back leg that I moved into a more natural position.  It is definitely an awkward-looking pose, but a very real one that I see often when deer crawl under a fence.  Certainly not the most attractive pose a deer ever struck, but my goal was to NOT draw three bucks standing there broadside.  I am hoping to show action. 

Anyway, tell me what you don't like about it.  You won't hurt my feelings.  Smiley
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« Reply #6 on: July 20, 2011, 08:19:36 PM »

Very nice work! They look very real. Great details.
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« Reply #7 on: July 24, 2011, 07:10:05 PM »

More stickers.....



The remaining bushes in the far background won't have a lot of detail, so they should go a little bit faster than the detailed ones in the foreground.  Then I'll finish all the grass and shadows around the bushes as well as the little bit of sky at the top.
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« Reply #8 on: July 24, 2011, 10:12:09 PM »

Thanks you for taking the time to post your awesome drawing. Very impressive!!!!!!!! I will be looking back here to see the progress for sure.
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« Reply #9 on: July 26, 2011, 12:44:26 PM »

Looking good.  I do however have some things that are bothering me. 

#1 the crawling buck.  The pose of action is fine but the front shoulders and the liver back have different textures and its throwing my eyes.  Almost looks like a deer popping out of a bear.
#2 would be the jumping buck.  All the others have dimension and stand out.  This one is lost.  It was better when there were no dark bushes right behind him. 
#3 would be the dark bushes. No highlights?  The hair on the deer is lost in the extreme highlights but no detail loss in the bushes? 

The bushes are screaming to loud at me and the deer are starting to dissapear.
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« Reply #10 on: July 26, 2011, 02:05:50 PM »

Thanks for the thoughts.  I see the same things, and I plan to address that in the final stage.  Once I get all the bushes done, I'll go back and add more darks to the deer and highlights to the bushes and such.  I'll try to work it all together to make it pop as best I can.  But the things you mentioned are the main things I'll work on in the end.  Gotta have the deer pop (hopefully).
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« Reply #11 on: July 29, 2011, 08:30:51 PM »

More progress.  In the home stretch now.

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« Reply #12 on: July 30, 2011, 02:16:32 PM »

This is stunning! Can I ask you, what's a ballpark cost to have something like this done?
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« Reply #13 on: July 30, 2011, 02:39:07 PM »

This is stunning! Can I ask you, what's a ballpark cost to have something like this done?

PM sent, Trixi.  It's enough to amount to maybe $10/hour if you look at it like that.  Not getting rich fast enough at that rate.  Cheesy
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« Reply #14 on: August 01, 2011, 07:00:57 PM »

Here's the final product.

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