I like that series of forms, but I'm not sure what the sculpter had in mind w/ that flat spot you are referring to. I think your eye looks okay, but I would have had it a little less "lazy" (less clay) in the front of the eye. I tried to show the difference in my illustration, if it makes any sense. Take it for what it's worth, I admire your work and realize you should be giving me the suggestions.
Eddie, thanks very much for taking the time to take pics and post them on here. I think the deer looks great. I also see exactly what Cole is trying to show. How are you caping your deer. I cape mine burr to burr and cant slip my cape over that eye work without messing it up!
maybe i'm a rebel here, but I like the relaxed look?Especially with the bigger, older bucks who have seen years of battle and have the built up scar tissue to show it ??