Critique On First Deer

Get reference pics and break your eyes down in small areas , your eyes are wrong shape, use glue all over , lip line is or should be hair to hair no fillers or paint for the most part . You have the basics but need to really study hair patterns and the shapes of the eyes, nose and ear butts , every area has a rule of thumb you might say , that’s what you need to focus on .

 

Let me add this , I see it a lot with new people, they carve or remove to much of the nose out . Get yourself a reference nose cast from any of the supply companies and study the nose shape and what stays and what needs to be removed foam wise from the form to give you the proper nose shape , this is a pic of one of my mounts nose , I cut it off form , dremled it out and put a septum in then glued it back on . Because I’ve been doing this so long I can do that in 20 minutes if that . It enhances your mount 10 fold and takes same amount of time to do once you get use to it .

 

Congrats on your first and many more to go!
There’s a lot going on that’s not correct but your close and it’s up to you to either look into one on one class or readying references the proper way.
You have issues with hair aliment with ears , shoulders nose eye etc. over painting also in ears and nose . Like said it’s there but without proper knowledge of someone showing you exactly what wrong it’s hard to understand what’s needed to correct you the proper way. Your on your way keep it up.

 

Very accurate nose interior Glen!