I'm a proofreading nut. Some words are capitalized that shouldn't be. Make sure the spelling, grammar and punctuation are all correct....I'm sure some of your clients are highly educated doctors and such! I'm sure it wouldn't keep them from using you regardless. Normally, when you look at a top of the line company's brochure, the above mentioned is spot on! I'm sure you want it to match the quality of the work you do. I also agree with the font comments. I'm just a nobody, but you asked for opinions! You're still the man in my book! Good luck.